Talk:Alzheimer's disease in the Hispanic/Latino population

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: While this is well written and sourced, you draw conclusions and state them in the voice of WP, which is not allowed..

 Onel 5969  TT me 10:41, 8 December 2022 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your help. I am the teacher of the course from which the student uploaded the article. It is great to have your opinion and wisdom. Your comments are really helpful and more comments can only serve to improve the article. I want to give the student a chance to fix the article, but if it isn't fixed, I'll work on it next week (when the course is finished).BrainMan2017 (talk) 03:58, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Dearest OneI5969 - I went through the article and think that I removed the "opinions". I also did a grammar and fact check. Can you look it over?  If you agree, can you then remove the warning that you posted?  I want to show this page to the Alzheimer Association and NIA, but want the page in good shape before showing it.  Thanks! BrainMan2017 (talk) 15:38, 12 December 2022 (UTC)BrainMan2017
 * so they see this. * Pppery * it has begun... 00:02, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi. Yes, it looks okay now.  I've already marked it reviewed, but will remove the tag.  And thanks  for the ping.  Onel 5969  TT me 02:09, 13 December 2022 (UTC)