Talk:Amarna art

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The section "sculpture" is somewhat problematic as it contains descriptions of images that in the meantime have been removed from the article or deleted. "Notice the hands ...", "in this sculpture, notice the hips" etc. are wordings that are not very helpful to the reader if he cannot see the corresponding images. --Proofreader (talk) 18:52, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

Please add a list of related literature if it is possible — Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.37.144.146 (talk) 19:16, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

Lead
the lead is large and contains material on background, which is not in body of article, so that needs moving and lead needs to be summary of sections. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 09:28, 22 January 2016 (UTC)
 * Not really - the rest of the pretty crap article needs to catch up with the lead. Now expanded Johnbod (talk) 16:58, 25 January 2016 (UTC)

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