Talk:Amos Bar

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Dear editors,

This article is the English version of an existing article in Hebrew which I wrote, too.

I would appreciate any comments and remarks in order to improve this English version.

Regards Ido. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Idodan (talk • contribs) 10:52, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I have made some initial changes. I would mention that the article is almost exclusively unsourced (apart from the references to published works on the editors website). Sources should be added. Also, you should correctly sign off comments this and other Talk pages with type four tildes (~) at the end of your comment, which reproduce your User details and the date. Davshul (talk) 09:10, 9 May 2011 (UTC)