Talk:Ancient navies and vessels

D1Engineer (talk) 15:16, 11 April 2012 (UTC) Meets word count, Needs and info box with pictures and more citations. The articles themself could use some work they dont seem to flow

Flows like an argumentative paper rather than informational. Language needs more scholarly tone. Seth4404 (talk) 15:28, 11 April 2012 (UTC)

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Peer Review
1. The 500 word requirement per person is not there in the article. No leading introductory paragraph there. Need two more sections of content. Citations are present but you need to add images.

2. The resources are of sufficient authority and accurate.

3. You are of to a good start with the article, and it has a couple of errors in it. The article is missing content like more paragraphs and some of the other requirements.

Asingh247 (talk) 15:38, 11 April 2012 (UTC)A.J Singh Completeness:

500 words per person:No Lead Paragraph:No 4 Sections of content: No   Minimum ammount of citations: No    Images:No

Evaluation of Resources:

Are the sources listed in the References of sufficient authority? Yes Are the sources listed in the References of accurate?Yes Conduct searches of the topic yourself. Do you feel like the authors found worth while articles or just easily available articles?Yes

Readability & Content:

Is the information being presented factual in nature? Yes Is the information being presented objective? (No Bias) Yes Does the article flow effectively? Yes Does the article feeling like it is missing content? Yes I do like how you made sections to make it more easy to read, adds a nice feel.You should get some pictures though, they just make everything easier and more pleasant to read.

Dmitry Borovkov — Preceding unsigned comment added by 198.189.57.10 (talk) 15:14, 16 April 2012 (UTC)

Peer Review
Completeness: Needs more content to meet the word count requirement. 500 words per person: It seems that both authors need to add content. Lead Paragraph: Needs to be a little more specific. 4 Sections of content: four sections are created but not all have content Minimum ammount of citations: there are 2 but the rquired number Images: none Evaluation of Resources: Simply needs more sources but looks good so far. Are the sources listed in the References of sufficient authority?: both sources look good and go into great detail. Both are devoted to the topic. Are the sources listed in the References of accurate?: Yes, they look to present a lagre amount of information. Conduct searches of the topic yourself. Do you feel like the authors found worth while articles or just easily available articles? I think that these articles may have been easy to find but are also good sources. Readability & Content: It flows quite well and presents the information in factual manner. Is the information being presented factual in nature? Yes Is the information being presented objective? (No Bias) Yes Does the article flow effectively? Yes Does the article feeling like it is missing content? Yes the other two parts of Ancient Navies is missing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Concept12 (talk • contribs) 14:22, 18 April 2012 (UTC)

Concept12 (talk) 15:35, 18 April 2012 (UTC)

Expansion needed
This article should be expanded with short paragraphs for (at least) the Greek, Phoenician, Assyrian, and Carthaginian navies. It might also be good idea to discuss different kinds of ancient warships in this article (e.g. bireme, trireme, quadrireme, quinquereme, decereme, etc.) Michael! (talk) 20:51, 11 March 2013 (UTC)

Does Not Represent a Worldwide View
I think that, given the lack of attention to the Ancient Chinese navies - most importantly the Han Navy, the navies of the Indian subcontinent or Polynesian or Pacific Northwest Coast cultures' naval forces this article should have the aforementioned cultural areas' naval histories added to them or someone needs to tag this article for not representing a worldwide view and specifically being ethnocentric to the cultures of Western Eurasia and the Mediterranian. I will probably do at least some of this by Sunday and I would love to have my fellow Wikipedians help if they so wish. 自教育 (talk) 20:02, 23 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Even being med centric no coverage of the ancient Greek and Carthaginian either.--KTo288 (talk) 20:42, 9 September 2015 (UTC)