Talk:Arctia plantaginis

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I deleted the biology subheading because there were no citations for the information under it. The information under subspecies was moved into a higher section. Description was left as I had found it, as was the first sentence of the lead section. All other information was added by KmarcusBC. — Preceding unsigned comment added by KmarcusBC (talk • contribs) 00:33, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

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Editing/Review
This page looks really good. I found it difficult to find much to change, but I did change some grammatical errors. In addition, I made some sentence structural changes in the description and lead paragraphs to make the language smoother. Jenniferra (talk) 04:11, 6 October 2017 (UTC)

Hello! I was super impressed by this article and the amount of information and detail you were able to provide for your moth. The sections were also very concise and well explained. It was especially interesting to learn about how the diet of different moths can lead to different traits in life! I went through and simply changed a few grammatical issues as well as added the scientific name for the Blue tit in the enemies section. Something I would add is regarding the Habitat section I was left curious on why the Wood Tiger moth prefers to spend time close to lupine stands. Is there some symbiotic relationship there?Richywutang2018 (talk) 04:42, 6 October 2017 (UTC)

As you are making your final edits, I would recommend adding some more information to your shorter sections, such as Mating. I think expanding on Enemies would be particularly useful, because we know the moth has specialized defenses. How do the predators respond and/or evolve in response to those defense mechanisms? Not sure if this is information you can find, but something about how predator and prey interact could be interesting. Mnoronha456 (talk) 02:52, 30 November 2017 (UTC)