Talk:Aydar Akhatov

Untitled
This article is not an autobiography. The article has only real information. There are links to relevant sources. This article isn't an orphan, because it has link to other Wikipedia articles. The article is quite acceptable for Wikipedia and is not contrary to the rules. The article will be improved. Everyone can take part in this. Thank you. --Rexmaxx (talk) 22:31, 16 May 2013 (UTC)

May 2013
There are still a number of issues that need addressing, including

Orphan: A page is an orphan when no other Wikipedia pages link to it - it's not about how many pages it links to, but rather how many pages link to it - in this case none The tone of the article: Avoid biased, promotional, "peacock" terms such as "the brilliant teacher" References: Avoid unsubstantiated claims, such as "Aydar Akhatov is an international expert in the field of ecology and economic management methods of environmental protection" - this statement has no basis for reference. you need to prove that he is an "international expert" by providing suitable references at this point

"For unapproved performance on the city radio and automobile plant "KAMAZ" he was dismissed the chief of inspection" ...again, a source is needed to substantiate this claim

"''In 1990 Aydar Akhatov received a title of the most popular regional politician "Mr. Time-'90''" ...again, this needs a verifiable source!

In general, more 3rd party references are needed to substantiate a number of claims in this article for it to be considered credible. References also need to be from more varied sources - at presently a large number of reference point to what appears to be the subject's own website.

GreatMarkO (talk) 22:24, 17 May 2013 (UTC)

Correction
Respected user GreatMarkO. First of all, I agree with your comments. Second, the article corrected now in accordance with your remarks. Rexmaxx (talk) 18:40, 21 May 2013 (UTC)

Updates
Rexmaxx, I have updated your article to indicate where issues still remain. In summary:

Citation Style: Place citations where they belong i.e. immediately after the sentence they relate to, rather than a long string of citations at the end of long paragraphs I've also indicated several places where claims are made but not substantiated with any inline citations/references

Meaningless links to other Wiki pages: For example, the word "time" in the line "For the first time in the USSR / Russia..." doesn't need linking to the Wikipedia page on the definition of time!!

Avoid ambiguous phrases: Example: "Aydar Akhatov paints pictures in virtually all styles and genres"

I hope that helps! GreatMarkO (talk) 17:15, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Done. --Rexmaxx (talk) 18:05, 28 May 2013 (UTC)

Blatant self-promotion
The article about a thoroughly discredited Russian Wikipedia editor, obviously written by the same person. Please see the deletion page at the Russian Wikipedia http://ru.wikipedia.org/wiki/Википедия:К_удалению/1_марта_2009#.D0.90.D1.85.D0.B0.D1.82.D0.BE.D0.B2.2C_.D0.90.D0.B9.D0.B4.D0.B0.D1.80_.D0.93.D0.B0.D0.B1.D0.B4.D1.83.D0.BB.D1.85.D0.B0.D0.B5.D0.B2.D0.B8.D1.87 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.49.120.175 (talk) 20:38, 4 November 2013 (UTC)

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