Talk:Barry De Vorzon

Fixing the spelling of his name
How do we fix the spelling of his name not only here but throughout Wikipedia?

On his Web site, he spells it DeVorzon, without a space.

http://www.masterwriter.com/aboutus.html

Misty MH (talk) 12:24, 1 November 2011 (UTC)


 * A Wikipedia search redirects "Barry Devorzon" to this page, so I presume there's a redirect page with that title. I guess the content of this page could be put there, and this page made the redirect page, if you felt strongly enough about it. Lyn50 (talk) 03:58, 2 January 2016 (UTC)


 * I see that his repertoire at BMI has his name as "DE VORZON", two words. Is it possible he's used both over the years? Lyn50 (talk) 04:01, 2 January 2016 (UTC)
 * the correct spelling is Barry Devorzon. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bdevorzon (talk • contribs) 20:57, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you. What remains is to figure out how reliable sources spell your name, because that determines the article title per WP:COMMONNAME, even though the article itself can refer to you by the actual spelling. ~Anachronist (talk) 22:04, 23 May 2024 (UTC)

Doesn't make sense
His first composing big hit was the rock song "Dreamin'," sung by Johnny Burnette in 1960, although he had a number-one hit previously called "Just Married," which he wrote for Marty Robbins in 1958.

How can a 1960 release be his first "composing big hit" if he had a "number-one hit previously" in 1958. Why "although"?

I think this guy deserves a better page than this.

Lyn50 (talk) 07:58, 31 December 2015 (UTC)


 * Rewrote that sentence. The 1958 #1 was on the Country chart. References to follow [done]. Lyn50 (talk) 12:04, 1 January 2016 (UTC)

Lead and "Biography" sections
Much of the content in the lead section doesn't seem to mentioned anywhere else in the rest of the article. Perhaps this is because the article started out as a stub and was subsequently expanded thereafter. This kind of thing, though, is generally not in accordance with MOS:LEAD because the lead section of an article ideally summarizes what comes later; in other words, it's not really supposed to be the only place the content is found, except perhaps those case where the article is nothing more than a lead section. Another thing worth considering is that the entire article is a "biography" so to speak so it seems a bit odd (perhaps only to me) for their to be a sub-section of the article titled "Biography". It might be better rename that section and perhaps even further divide it into subsections either by time or by career highlights. Doing so might make it also easier for future expansion. -- Marchjuly (talk) 00:50, 24 May 2024 (UTC)


 * I just attempted to fix those issues. I renamed "Biography" to "Career", moved the stuff in the lead into the Career section, and added a summary sentence to the lead. ~Anachronist (talk) 15:51, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks for doing that. -- Marchjuly (talk) 20:10, 24 May 2024 (UTC)