Talk:Battle of Chach

Making a point etc.
A huge allied army, composed of the Hindu Shahis and allied Rajas [..] is meaningless phrasing.

Trilochanapala failed to prevent Mahmud's troops from crossing across the Indus, who then set out for the plains of [..]
 * Who refers to - Trilochanapala or Mahmud's troops? A reader has to pause for at-least a mini-second to assess whatever the line is trying to convey.

I can go on .... TrangaBellam (talk) 10:06, 20 May 2022 (UTC)


 * No, it's quite clear, and the second sentence clearly implies that this is about Mahmud. पाटलिपुत्र  Pat  (talk) 10:10, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
 * And what is this obsession with adjectives? "Relentless", "ultimately" etc.? TrangaBellam (talk) 10:11, 20 May 2022 (UTC)