Talk:Battle of Werl

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Needs a little more context regarding the Cologne War; it's not clear how this battle in particular resulted in a consolidation of Wittlesbach authority, etc. Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:00, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
 * thanks, will do. Do you know anyone interested in collaborating on these battle articles? Also, will you look at that part again? I think it should be clearer now. Auntieruth55 (talk) 22:05, 2 September 2009 (UTC)
 * I've upgraded it to a B as you've explained the context more clearly now. Still a couple of things to watch out for. Your lead is very short and should be expanded. Remember that it's supposed to summarize the body of the article. And watch the formatting of your references; there are a couple that are missing the p. for page number. See WP:CITE for more information. I suspect that you'll be working alone on these as you've found a very specialized topic that interests you. It's nice when its otherwise, but you can't count on it happening very often. Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:20, 2 September 2009 (UTC)
 * adjusted parameters to match B class assessment. Auntieruth55 (talk) 19:12, 15 September 2009 (UTC)