Talk:Battle of the Eastern Solomons

Battle Map and Featured Article (FA) Plans
I've been trying to replace the old U.S. Navy battle map for this article with a self-made map using "Campaign Cartographer" (CC2). Unfortunately, the notoriously user-unfriendly CC2 program is resisting my best efforts to get a map done. I'll keep working on it but will try to see, after one final copyedit, if the article can pass FA review as is. Cla68 12:38, 20 June 2006 (UTC)

POV?
I altered "low on fuel" to "claiming a need to fuel". His low fuel state isn't established fact, & accepting his claim uncritically is, I'd say, POV--or naive. IMO, it smacks of cowardice, & FJF did end up relieved after a similar "need to fuel". Trekphiler 11:19, 4 October 2006 (UTC)
 * As reflected in the footnotes for the Battle of Savo Island, several historians have indeed asserted that Fletcher's statement that his ships were low on fuel on August 9 was a dubious claim. However, the source I cited for this article (Hammel) didn't go into whether or not the claim was dubious or not.  Thus, to say, "claiming a need to fuel" might be asserting something that the cited source for that sentence doesn't say.  I don't think it's a really big deal, but, the text in the article needs to reflect exactly what the specific cited source for that passage is stating.  Also, the question as to whether Fletcher's withdrawal from the battle area was cowardice or a prudent decision to protect the few remaining U.S. aircraft carriers is still a matter of debate among historians.  Cla68 23:40, 4 October 2006 (UTC)


 * "Claimed" sounds like a lie was made. The landing was a success and the strategic carriers were withdrawn out of range of attack by land based, multi-engine, torpedo bombers.  Fletcher asked to be met by a tanker, he would have asked for replacement fighters if any had been available.  The task force had been in combat and of course needed  replenishment and replacements.  Mention of cowardice in your remarks is offensive.216.203.108.114 (talk) 14:03, 8 June 2008 (UTC)

Discrepancy regarding the Chitose
At the moment there's a sentence that states that five TBF Avengers from the USS Saratoga scored near-hits on Chitose which damaged the ship. However, when I click on the reference tag that takes me to the bottom of the page, (there seems to be two sources listed under this tag actually) there's a link to the "Chitose tabular record of movement" page from combinedfleet.com which relates a similar account but states that the planes which attacked were SBD Dauntlesses rather than Avengers. Now I don't have access to the other source (or any other source for that matter) so I don't want to go ahead and edit this just yet, but perhaps someone else can verify which is correct? &mdash;Masterblooregard (talk) 00:35, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
 * It's SBDs. Avengers were torpedo planes, which don't generally score near-misses. --Yaush (talk) 00:44, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Mmk, "Carrier Clash" by Eric Hammel says that it was SBDs (also from USS Saratoga) so I went ahead and changed the sentence and reference. There were five Avengers accompanying the SBDs, but they didn't attack Chitose and didn't cause the damage. The bit in the reference tag regarding the Chitose being towed back for repairs I assume is taken from the combinedfleet.com link, so I left that there &mdash;Masterblooregard (talk) 00:24, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

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Quick check of old FA
I read this through, did a c/e and checked the images as part of WP:URFA/2020, and it looks satisfactory. While I could make a few nitpicks about citation and source formatting, and it could do with a check to see if there has been any new publications with fresh takes on the battle, I don't consider it merits a FAR. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:16, 23 November 2020 (UTC)

Opposition to refactoring References & Footnotes?
I'd like to refactor the References section to eventually look something like, where the H2 References section contains the following H3's: Footnotes, Citations, Bibliography, and Further reading. I think in most cases, the paragraph-long explanatory footnotes would be clearer when set off by the typical efn/notelist numbering ([a], [b], etc.). That way, a reader will have a clearer indication that explanatory text might provide further insight, rather than giving them no indication that the note is not just a reference.

To be clear, I'm primarily motivated to separate the (would-be) efns from the refs/sfns. As an example, the 1st note (re: 176 aircraft in the infobox) would be converted to, and its  would become a  itself.

Out the gate, I'm not convinced every single "paragraph-long ref" should be converted blindly, because the s at the beginning of each one may or may not support what the text of the note says, so certainly some reference checking would have to occur before those are swapped over. But I think maybe 1/3 of them are pretty much ready to become s pretty quickly. &emsp;—&#8239;sbb&#8239;(talk) 02:18, 13 August 2021 (UTC)

Defective sentence, section History: 3rd para. beginning with "between 15 and 20 August", next to last sentence has fragment, "and in the attrition"
I can't fix this, because I don't know what the author wants to say. Sentence is incomplete Sudzydoogiedawg (talk) 02:36, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

Should read Background, not history Sudzydoogiedawg (talk) 02:43, 9 January 2023 (UTC)