Talk:Bauhaus Dessau Foundation

External links modified
Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified 1 one external link on Bauhaus Dessau Foundation. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20160303204958/https://portal.d-nb.de/opac.htm?query=stiftung+bauhaus+dessau&method=simpleSearch to https://portal.d-nb.de/opac.htm?query=stiftung+bauhaus+dessau&method=simpleSearch

When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true or failed to let others know (documentation at ).

Cheers.— InternetArchiveBot  (Report bug) 01:09, 29 October 2016 (UTC)

Issues, minor and otherwise
The article has a few too many of them, which I would appreciate help with ironing out.

The "History" section is either really poorly worded or an anachronic mess. Was it built in 1926, or was it the "historical" Bauhaus (which I assume was meant to be "original")?

What are the "three mainstays" of the Collection section? Was that line meant to be in the previous paragraph?

What exactly does the Workshop do? The Collection section collects things, the Academy teaches things (in English, apparently), and the Workshop... does both?

The entirety of the "Further Activities" section is worded like an ad. I can't tell if how much of it is exaggerated, or how to change it without original research, because the sources I found were really unhelpful.

And the lack of citations in general. There's one for the foundation in general (in German only, would enjoy a translation from something besides Google) and one that says "you can sleep here!!". cogsan (talk) 15:46, 23 January 2023 (UTC)