Talk:Birth Control Review

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jeneill. Peer reviewers: Gonzalm6.

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Peer Review by Tsion
I really like the introduction of where the word birth control came from and the origins of it! It allowed the reader to get a better understanding of birth control before jumping into the article. The eugenic section of the article I think could use some more information because I personally didn't fully understand why that section is important in birth control. Maybe tying in its importance to birth control may be a good idea?. Also maybe adding a section that relates birth control to today's society might be a good move. Overall the article is written well and allows the reader to understand what birth control is! Tsion s (talk) 03:25, 3 April 2018 (UTC)Tsion S.

Peer Review by Ben M.
I really enjoyed the article. It was short, informative and really caught my attention. There were a couple of things I noticed that struck me in an odd way. In the second sentence under History, the final word is "nuisance1". I'm not sure if this was deliberate but I think the 1 is unintentional. This also happened with the last word in the history section "over1", and in the last word in the Circulation section "Eugenics6". Aside from these few things, there is not much that I would fix myself. I think this is a well thought out article and it looks good. — Preceding unsigned comment added by BenMaestas (talk • contribs) 04:15, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review Maria Gonzalez
As I was reading the article, and I got to the history section I felt like I knew this already. Then I remembered Ryans lecture today was about history on birth control. I'm not sure if we can use lectures as a source, but I bet if you added some of that information in the history it would make it more interesting. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gonzalm6 (talk • contribs) 04:24, 3 April 2018 (UTC)