Talk:Brent W. Jeffs

Comma
I added an Oxford comma after "advocate" in the first sentence, because "Jeffs is an author, advocate and member of the influential Jeffs family in the ...FLDS Church" may sound like he is an advocate for the Jeffs family and the Church. Sadiemonster (talk) 14:58, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

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