Talk:Brown's syndrome

Complete Edit/Re-write required?
This article seems quite poorly written in general. Poor wording and grammar is immediately evident and I suspect some of the facts will need verifying and referencing? I will try to re-write parts of it in the coming weeks, but if anybody has a special interest in this topic please feel free to collaborate. DW1979 (talk) 12:04, 1 February 2010 (UTC)