Talk:California State Association of Counties

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Reads like a PR piece
I added the template because the article reads pretty much like a PR piece, not an encyclopedia. For example:


 * "the issues that CSAC is confronting are enormous; their outcomes have the potential of permanently changing the landscape of California government"


 * "In Washington, D.C., CSAC has not only taken California’s message to Capitol Hill, but has also been influential in the development of the [National Association of Counties’ (NACo][5]. legislative platform."


 * "to offer municipal finance services to counties and to private entities that provide significant public benefit to the residents of counties."


 * "Throughout discussion on each of these key areas, CSAC has been – and will continue to be – the voice of California counties"

"Are enormous" "been influential" "significant public benefit." "Will continue to be" All peacock WP:PCK terms--and an unsubstantiated crystal ball predicton. And says who? Primary sources, i.e., the Association itself, aren't enough.Barte (talk) 20:33, 5 January 2010 (UTC)

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