Talk:Carly Pearce/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 04:08, 3 January 2022 (UTC) Nominator: ChrisTofu11961 (talk · contribs) at 21:57, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

General

 * Following terms are linked multiple times in the article. Suggesting to import this script. They should be linked only twice–once in the lead section, and once in the prose:
 * Grand Ole Opry
 * Bluegrass
 * Dollywood
 * Country Airplay
 * Alison Krauss
 * Trisha Yearwood
 * American Songwriter
 * Taste of Country


 * Done. Also Dollywood is only linked twice (once in the overview and once in the prose).
 * No, these all are linked twice in the prose. Suggesting to import this script. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:55, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Never mind, I'll fix this. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 11:32, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Now done. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 11:35, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

Detailed

 * her self-penned "Every Little Thing" found acclaim on satellite radio — can we rephrase to make it a bit more neutral?
 * Done
 * Billboard Country Airplay — avoid linking two adjacent words
 * Done
 * a high honor in the country music industry — not required to mention, at-least in the lead.
 * Oh I did not write that. I removed it.
 * in Taylor Mill, Kentucky — Missing MOS:GEOCOMMA
 * Done.
 * developed an interest — remove 'an'
 * Done.
 * while she was a child — should be "during her childhood"
 * Done
 * In home video — "In a home video"
 * Done
 * Starting at age 11 — " Starting at age 11"
 * Done
 * of bluegrass material in the lead v. a Bluegrass band — be consistent with capitalization.
 * Done
 * The female producer Pearce — " The female producer Pearce "
 * Done
 * I’ve — fix the quote marks (’ to ')
 * Done
 * she met Pete Fisher who was — comma after 'Fisher'
 * Done
 * Fisher was responsible for providing Pearce the opportunity to perform — "Fisher provided Pearce the opportunity to perform"
 * Done
 * Thomas Rhett and Blake Shelton. — comma after "Rhett" (Oxford comma)
 * You mentioned this above. I believe I already fixed it.
 * "Next Girl." — here, full stop should be outside quotes (I think, fell free to correct me)
 * Yup you're right.
 * These events included her divorce from singer, Michael Ray — the article mentions her divorce before mentioning her marriage!
 * Ok, well I added the phrase "After taking time to marry singer Michael Ray..." under music career. It shouldn't go into more detail here until the reader gets to the "personal life" section.
 * "in a place of hope.". — 2 full-stops.
 * Done
 * of The Grand Ole Opry. — "of the Grand Ole Opry."
 * Done
 * Ricky Skaggs and Rhonda Vincent — comma after "Skaggs"
 * Done
 * Allmusic's — 'M' should be capital
 * Done
 * Good Morning America — italics
 * Done
 * '90s ... but, like, — add after "'90s"
 * Not sure what you mean here?
 * I meant to add a non-breaking space after it. I have now done it. — Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 11:38, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
 * That references in the "Ref." section should be center-aligned.
 * Done
 * Few entries in "Tours" section need citations.

Images

 * Image can take ALT text.
 * Thank you. I added it to the infobox.