Talk:Caroline Leaf

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Hello Laracrafty,

Thanks you for your feedback. To answer your concerns about the "awards" section: I decided to leave the other awards (not won based on a single work or at festival) out of the chart for continuity purposes. I hope that seems clear now!

Namekian (talk) 19:06, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

Hi!

You did a really great job with this article. Everything is very clearly written and there is a lot of information on Leaf and her endeavors. You also linked a fair amount of other topics mentioned within the article to other Wikipedia pages which I also thought was good. It was smart to include a "Animation techniques and influence" sections because it is relevant to her life's work and you had a lot of information concerning this topic. In the first and second paragraph under "Career" there is a fair bit of information that could possibly be moved/integrated to the "animation techniques and influence" section. I would also integrate the "other awards" subcategory into the main table; if there is a reason you did not do this in the first place a possible explanation would help. All in all good work!

Laracrafty (talk) 17:11, 8 November 2016 (UTC)

Hello,

I just wanted to let you know that I will be adding some information to your current article.

--Namekian (talk) 18:52, 17 October 2016 (UTC)

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Career end date
I notice that she was still directing documentary films past 1995, so that date is wrong. Just because she wasn't animating films doesn't mean her career was over. Stictly speaking, her teaching is also part of her career and ought to be noted there and it doesn't stop either till we know she's retired altogether or dead. As an aside, I don't see how wikilinking dates to the corresponding article "in film" or "in animation" or what have you is helpful (a number of editors seem obsessed with doing this on comics pages, I've noticed). But I can't be bothered to look up a MOS to see if there's a guideline.ZarhanFastfire (talk) 19:18, 31 July 2019 (UTC)