Talk:Cathedral Peak Granodiorite

File:Map of Cathedral Peak Granodiorite.svg to appear as POTD soon
Hello! This is a note to let the editors of this article know that File:Map of Cathedral Peak Granodiorite.svg will be appearing as picture of the day on October 18, 2013. You can view and edit the POTD blurb at Template:POTD/2013-10-18. If this article needs any attention or maintenance, it would be preferable if that could be done before its appearance on the Main Page. Thanks! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:38, 5 October 2013 (UTC)

What is it?
Is it really too much to ask that articles such as this say in the introduction, in a simple and clear way, what it actually is? If it weren't for the accompanying pictures there's nothing in the introduction to indicate that the article is even about rocks and mountains. All it says is it's part of an 'intrusive suite' for which there's no explanation and I have to follow two or three links before I get any idea what that means. If I've understood it's a rock formation that has been pushed up through the surrounding landscape by the action of magma beneath the surface. Can't it say that? By all means have as much technical information in the article as necessary but the introduction shouldn't assume we're all petrologists! 130.246.132.177 (talk) 10:44, 18 October 2013 (UTC)