Talk:Central Ordnance Munitions Depot

October 2009
hi, how should we divide into three sections? I think sooyang is in charge of the background and construction? Sunny is in charge of the history and restoration while I am in charge of its present days development. what do you guys think? 2009534406huichiawu09 (talk) 23:17, 11 October 2009 (UTC)allie

hey we totally should. I will work on the history and restoration part 2008243529lo09 (talk) 15:04, 12 October 2009 (UTC)

Construction part is kind of overlapping with history part and Crown Wine Cellars part. Is that okay?? And also I am going to do the back ground part by briefly introducing what you guys write in your parts. what do you think? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 2008576433JANG09 (talk • contribs) 06:20, 16 October 2009 (UTC) 2008576433JANG09 (talk) 06:26, 16 October 2009 (UTC)sooyoung

Thanks for that sooyang yea i think the overlapping part is true,.. i ll look into it 2008243529lo09 (talk) 08:28, 16 October 2009 (UTC)

It's alright as long as you dont go over the top. Have another question regarding the second wine cellars? Do you think it is neccessary to introduce the second wine cellars, located in new territories or no? 2009534406huichiawu09 (talk) 08:36, 16 October 2009 (UTC)

Well... I will try to cover the second wine cellar's construction briefly at the end of my part. I don't think we have to focus that much on the second wine cellar because there is not that much information to write about compare to the Central Ordinanace Munitions Depot. -Sooyoung

Please refer to http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Cheatsheet for references.2009534406huichiawu09 (talk) 05:28, 17 October 2009 (UTC)

yeah.. the main part is almost done.. now left with us is the reference.. come on everyone.. work on the reference.! 2008243529lo09 (talk) 06:17, 17 October 2009 (UTC)

okie .. and allie, don't forget to upload the photo!! -Sooyoung

I have finished my part (did not do the reference yet) if you guys think that I have to add more, just tell me! 2008576433JANG09 (talk) 03:27, 18 October 2009 (UTC)sooyoung

hi sooyoung, It would be nice if you put the chinese characters for Crown WIne Cellars and maybe for people who type in Crown Wine Cellars, Wikipedia could redirect the page to Central Ordinance Munitions Depot.2009534406wu09 (talk) 22:57, 17 October 2009 (UTC)

NPOV is the major concern in regard to our Wikipedia project. In charge of the Crown Wine Cellars I find it at times difficult to be objective. FOr example, would it be subjective to introduce their membership options, climate control system and security system as it might suggest of advertising for the Crown WIne Cellars? 2009534406wu09 (talk) 00:07, 18 October 2009 (UTC)

Sooyoung: I think you should put the background section before the content block.2009534406wu09 (talk) 02:04, 18 October 2009 (UTC)

Allie: I put the chinese name next to its english name. yea.. I agree with introducing their membership options and other things might seem to be advertisement. but that is the fact thogh.. 2008576433JANG09 (talk) 11:16, 18 October 2009 (UTC)sooyoung

I have finished my part and the reference part... sooyoung.. we still need your reference part! work hard on it, let us know if u need any help 2008243529lo09 (talk) 06:27, 18 October 2009 (UTC)

Copyright violation warning
A substantial chunk of the material about the wartime history was copied almost verbatim from this article from China Daily on Baidu. I could have blanked out the article and had it deleted per WP:CSD, and your group will get zero marks for your assignment!

This edit looks almost like a straight copy and past of the source article, added without any quotation marks, references or attribution.

Please take greater care not to do that here on Wikipedia, because there are tools here which can get you caught! Ohconfucius ¡digame! 02:52, 30 October 2009 (UTC)

'Crown Worldwide Cellars' section
The text looked like it was written by Crown to publicise their wine vault, and was excessive in volume compared with the rest of the article. Earlier on I tagged it accordingly.

Now, after chopping away the rather promotional material from the section, the block of text has been ejected to Crown Worldwide Group. I then further trimmed it so as to be of due weight in relation to the rest of the article, and integrated into the 'Renovations' section. Ohconfucius ¡digame! 08:01, 30 October 2009 (UTC)