Talk:Charlotte Ellertson

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Comment
The content of your page is excellent. I just made a few grammatical changes to help make reading the content smoother. I found her to be a very interesting women and enjoyed reading about her. My only suggestions would be to expand the page a little bit to include anymore information that you might have about her. For instance, I noticed you said that she was married with two daughters. Do you know anything about her husband or the two daughters? Are they still living, do they have any connection with their mothers organization anymore? Just a thought to help add more content to the page. Excellent job on the citations and a good choice of picture. Maybe including a few other photos could break up the text a bit. Great start!Cooper kat2018 (talk) 19:17, 27 November 2017 (UTC)