Talk:Chloridea virescens

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Peer review
Hi! I looked over your article and it looks great. It was very interesting to read about your moth. I proofread your article and made changes in terms of grammar, structure, citations, etc. Hopefully it’ll read more smoothly, and I also added hyperlinks to some terms for clarity. I also changed the formatting of your subsections, which was a minor detail. One thing I noticed is that a lot of your information in the Egg section could fall under a new subsection for Oviposition, under Parental Care (which is in the outline we were given). So one suggestion I have is that you could split up the Egg section and find more information on oviposition habits, if possible. Overall, great job! J.j.lee (talk) 01:06, 28 October 2017 (UTC)

I went back and added some more links to uncommon terms, such as species of plants. I also changed the wording or added some punctuation of some sentences throughout your article for clarity and accuracy. I noticed you are missing a citation for the last part of your overview. Also, in your "Life cycle" section, it could be possible to create a subsection for senescence as I noticed you have a lot of relevant information throughout the section already. In the "Pheromones" section, could you possibly clarify what you mean by an antennectomized female? Finally, I think some more technical concepts in “Irradiation” and “Genetic engineering” could be clarified. For example, is the frequency of the resistant allele as high as 0.001 percent of the population? Could you clarify what an F1 female is for readers who may not know? Overall, great job! J.j.lee (talk) 17:42, 29 November 2017 (UTC)

Looked over your article and I thought you did a great job. As I was reading the article I felt your ideas flowed seamlessly and there was more than enough information present. I made some grammatical fixes in different places of the article. I also removed the external link subsection it is because it was already present in the References section. WAdekunle (talk) 02:17, 5 November 2017 (UTC)

Behavioral Ecology WikiProject Peer Review
Hello! Great article! I found it to be very informative. I made a couple of slight grammatical errors throughout the article, and removed various links that did not work. I also changed some sentence structure and kept the verb tense consistent throughout each section. I added links to various terms throughout the article. I suggest maybe adding a separate Oviposition section since it is mentioned in the Egg life cycle section, a Pheromone section since it is mentioned in the Sampling section, and a Mimicry section if there is more information available on the corn ear worm moth. Overall, great work! Pranita.kaginele (talk) 03:11, 29 October 2017 (UTC)

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