Talk:Clement Attlee/GA1

GA Review
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This article is seriously lacking in inline references. Please take a look at WP:CITE. Because of this, it has failed its Good Article nomination. Once the article is sufficiently referenced, please renominate it. Thanks! Gary King ( talk ) 00:57, 12 July 2008 (UTC)


 * This article is seriously lacking in inline references. I can only assume you have made this comment without looking at the article. Have you been looking at the same article I've been looking at? G-Man  ? 06:40, 16 July 2008 (UTC)


 * The following information lacks references:


 * "From 1907 to 1910" paragraph
 * "By the end of World War I" paragraph
 * Entire "Marriage and children" section
 * "   'Charity is a cold grey loveless thing. If a rich man wants to help the poor, he should pay his taxes gladly, not dole out money at a whim'." quote
 * "He went on to write:" quote
 * "At the 1922 general election," paragraph
 * "In 1926, he actively supported" paragraph
 * Almost all of " Opposition" section
 * Almost all of "Deputy prime minister" section

These are only from the first 6 of 15 sections in this article. Gary King ( talk ) 07:00, 16 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I'm not sure that seriously lacking was the correct description. However I've made big efforts to bring the article further up to scratch. Since I last nominated this. G-Man  ? 00:43, 29 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Regardless, it was my opinion at the time. Since then, I have given examples of what needs to be cited. In addition, there are still several issues that need to be addressed before this is renominated for GAN, including:


 * References all go after punctuation marks, not before, per WP:FN
 * Format references per WP:CITE/ES to include publisher and access date
 * "Further reading" goes after "References" per WP:LAYOUT
 * Only include a period in image captions when they are full sentences; several of them are sentence fragments.

Gary King ( talk ) 01:06, 29 July 2008 (UTC)