Talk:Cleveland Sight Center

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This is a pretty complete page and listing of what the Cleveland Sight Center (CSC) has to offer. Nice encyclopedic work and clear organization. But there are a few things missing and a few ways to adjust this and make the entry more comprehensive so that the issues raised by the community can be addressed. 1) You need to find sources other than just the CSC published material -- use more newspapers that you will find on Lexis Nexis (or did you do that already? You need to be signed into the library website in order to do this or do it from on campus). Search Google Scholar and Google Books. I found this reference in Google Scholar which gives the "history" of the CSC: http://en.scientificcommons.org/17791277 But Google Books will give you more in this regard. 2) Add a history section, even if it is short, noting the name change, etc. 3) Add a bibliography 4) By looking at some of the scientific writings, you might be able to mention the role of the CSC in scientific developments related to sight. This also might be a place to link to within WP -- by going to the pages with the various sight ailments and connecting the CSC to them, for example, or also connecting it to the "Cleveland" page. If you think about more than just current services and expand to include history, scientific research, and location, you'll make a more complete Wikipedia entry. Nice work so far! Radavis147 (talk) 16:56, 26 November 2010 (UTC)

Ysshim (talk) 19:51, 18 November 2010 (UTC) Your page looks great! Well-organized, clear writings in the contents. It was easy to read through. Just a few suggestions for you - 1) Perhaps in the beginning you could add History/Background of CSC and add mission statement/goal in there. 2) In terms of organization, it would be more clear if you break up the Service part into a few more categories. Maybe under "education", Preschool and the Camp could be in. 3) Add images: Images of CSC, camp would be good :) Good work!

How's it going? I'm Ace_Of_Raves (because Ace_of_Knaves was taken), a Georgetown student who's part of the Public Policy Initiative! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ace of Raves (talk • contribs) 00:59, 5 November 2010 (UTC)

To Do List:


 * 1) Add more secondary and tertiary sources
 * 2) Rewrite some of the more advertisement-sounding sections.
 * 3) Wikilinks....?
 * 4) Reformat section headers
 * 5) Assert notability

Completed 1, 2, 3, 4, and 5.

For later
 * 1) Infobox
 * 2) Pictures

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