Talk:Comandanta Ramona

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Hi, I've just addedmy first POV tag, so if I've misuesd it, apologies. It seems to me that the tone of the article is overly praiseworthy. While I have no doubt that Comandante Ramona did much for her cause, I wonder if phrases like "remarkable" should be used in the opening line of the article.

Tone

This article reads more like a hagiography than a biography! --Ror 15:58, 29 January 2006 (UTC)

That is right! No one can edit the page because they do not know about this REMARKABLE woman. They are ready to criticize, but not to learn.

um..
Then edit it, and dont complain. That is what wikipedia allows you to do.

You might also try "researching" the subject before you flag it at least.

Comandanta, not Comandante
In Spanish she is called "Comandanta", which while not an official Spanish word, is meant to stress the female gender of the commander. Can someone change the name of the article or move it? Meanwhile, I'll create one called Comandanta Ramona and redirect it here. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.120.216.109 (talk) 16:21, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia uses whatever name is most common in English language sources, which seems to be "Comandante Ramona". Kaldari (talk) 20:08, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

More sources
Comandante Ramona is discussed in the following books: Kaldari (talk) 20:08, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Firebrands: Portraits from the Americas
 * The Zapatista Reader
 * Homage to Chiapas: The New Indigenous Struggles in Mexico

Clean Up
I have deleted the "Roots of feminist platform" Section, as all of it was not related to Ramona. 24GT (talk) 13:59, 11 August 2022 (UTC)