Talk:Craigmillar Festival Society

Initial efforts
I think I've done all I want to on this article. There are just so many POV issues with the original text I'm afraid that just editing & wikifying it is not going to be enough; it looks like a major rewrite is going to required, and I'm just not finding this subject personally interesting enough to do that. -- 63.226.38.196 03:31, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

I have changed the tag to cleanup, as the format of the article appears fine, but it appears that there are still a lot of content cleanup issues that need to be addressed, especially about POV. Thanks, -- 12.106.111.10 21:11, 17 March 2006 (UTC)

I have tried to broaden the POV, with academic quotes and experts in this field. Andrew Crummy 2006-03-29 20:03:15 (UTC)

Quotes/Commentary
Since the Quotes section had been flagged by others, I changed it to a Commentary section with a list of references. A slight improvement, but this section still overshadows the rest of the article in terms of length. Not sure what else to do here.

Trelawnie (talk) 05:23, 3 February 2010 (UTC)