Talk:Culper Ring

Exposition v Summary style
Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, while most Sources are expositional; the more words, the less likely an internet user is to read it. So we don't need to know if they met over dinner, or talked quietly - there are a lot of details that are interesting to us as authors, but not relevant to What's this all about?

I've made a couple of edits to show what I mean, and you are more than welcome to undo them. They're intended to be helpful, so people will read your article. Robinvp11 (talk) 17:00, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Look good to me. I didn't do any of the previous editing, I just stumbled upon what I thought should be close to a B-class article and wanted a second set of eyes to assess the article. Thanks again for the edits. Ledalion (talk) 23:42, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
 * I might do some more then :). Robinvp11 (talk) 17:28, 13 May 2020 (UTC)