Talk:Czech lands in the High Middle Ages

Society
the last section in the society part is a total... not an english sentence

somebody fix this please — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A00:1028:9196:EF46:C1D7:A7B9:49AB:34B9 (talk) 18:53, 27 August 2014 (UTC)

Needs a rewrite
Great article, but I've tagged it with copy edit, because half of it sounds like it was written in Czech and then translated. This article needs to be rewritten in the English language. AllGloryToTheHypnotoad (talk) 23:44, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

copyedit
I just did a copyedit of this article. However, I have to admit that in places I wasn't 100% sure what the previous text was trying to say. I would appreciate if someone with more detailed knowledge of the topic than me could read it over again and check I haven't misinterpreted anything, factually. If you do so, please let me know and I will go over it again for style, which is still not always encyclopaedic.

I also kind of think the article needs a better structure (it goes through more or less chronologically, but jumps about to talking about architecture, structure of society etc.) Does anyone else have an opinion on this? Jdcooper (talk) 11:38, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Propose split
There is a huge overlap with Duchy of Bohemia for the first smaller part and with Kingdom of Bohemia for the second larger part of the article. Shouldn't the content of this article be split and integrated in those two? Marcocapelle (talk) 14:07, 18 April 2019 (UTC)