Talk:Dalí Paris

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Hi,

The map of Montmarte has been created by our creative staff. Anyway, in order to make things clear, i have deleted the map. Therefore, please, keep this page as it is.

Thanking you in advance,

Espace Dali —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 193.253.59.20 (talk • contribs).


 * The article contained redundant and superlative language about Dali. Dali has his own page so that content does not need to be repeated here and any text should reflect a neutral point of view. Also articles should not contain advertisements for commercial interests such as Fine Art Galleries and the overal article should not read like and advertisment WP:SPAM. If you would like to add text or images relevant to the article that your organization created you need to comply with Copyrights. Fountains of Bryn Mawr 14:47, 22 June 2007 (UTC)

Editorial Language
I removed the editorial language; the article had seemed like I was reading an advertisement from a travel brochure. However, I had to remove so much that there's really not much left of the article.Editfromwithout (talk) 22:53, 16 May 2012 (UTC)


 * I did further cleanup of promotional tone and repetition, and tagged for the absence of any references to WP:RS. Reify-tech (talk) 17:08, 16 July 2015 (UTC)