Talk:Dalila Puzzovio

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 January 2019 and 15 March 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Flynn.namala.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 19:46, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review Notes
Congratulations on starting on your Wiki page you have a great start! The first thing I noticed was that the intro is pretty minimal, what are some of her accomplishments? I think you can condense the early life and education portion and just add it into the intro to thicken it up a bit. If you can I'd suggest adding somethings about her childhood, what influenced her to make art, anything important to note about her family? Also i'd expand on the people she worked with. How were they influential in her work? what are they known for? how did working with them help further her career? Maybe you could also talk about the different places she made art, did she stay solely in Argentina? Was nationalism important to her and her work?

In the Career section theres a typo in the last sentence, I think it should say "... whom *she met"

On the other hand, I really like your inclusion of photos and the little info summary box on the side. Aesthetically this wikipedia site looks great, but it does seem to lack a lot of information about the artist. You could also try adding two sections on her art series, what pieces she's produced and things, as well as her exhibitions, where her work has been showcased. You have that in your career section but laying it out in bullet points could help lengthen your article and provide a better overview of the artist.

Good luck! -Flynn — Preceding unsigned comment added by Flynn.namala (talk • contribs) 22:43, 21 February 2019 (UTC)

1943 or 1945 which one is right? (for her YOB)
So I just found this on the new page feed and changed the year to 1943 as it said that in the article, but the other wikis have 1945 has her YOB. Which is the right year? Wgolf (talk) 21:14, 11 March 2019 (UTC)