Talk:Daniel Sloss

Intro section
"22-year old teenager" - is this a deliberate mistake or a joke or something? Lvsxy808 (talk) 11:21, 10 February 2012 (UTC)

Additional citations
Why and where does this article need additional citations for verification? What references does it need and how should they be added? See: Help:Shortened footnotes (you might try the Teahouse if you have questions). Hyacinth (talk) 01:07, 30 July 2014 (UTC)

Advert
Where and how does this article resemble an advert and how should it be improved? See: Spam (you might try the Teahouse if you have questions). Hyacinth (talk) 01:16, 30 July 2014 (UTC)

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Kai Humphries
I've removed all mentions of this person. The way it was added, with repeated mentions every now and then made it seem promotional and dubious in nature, given that it was unsourced as well. The two main refs: and  don't mention this individual. So probably non-notable, even if true, we don't mention each of everyone by name. Ugog Nizdast (talk) 02:58, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

Assessment
Here are a few suggestions on improving this page.
 * There's usually something mentioned about their parents in "Early life", I found two of the sources mentioning them by name and profession. FInd more references, if needed.
 * The entire Career section seems list-like (see WP:USEPROSE). Though not actually a list, writing it in short run-off statements make it as good as one. Consider rewording for better flow, trimming repeated content etc. For instance, there's no point in repeating in words exactly when, each time he appeared on Conan...the embedded list in the TV section already mentions that. Summarise it and say, he has appeared n times on Conan or something.
 * Additionally, I get the feeling this main section is weakly sourced, all content should mostly be verifiable from the sources given. Citing to the host's or broadcaster's website should be used sparingly (see WP:PRIMARY), always third-party secondary sources are preferred. Not everything is relevant here too, non-notable events and people should not mentioned.
 * His official site contains links to media articles about him. Good place to dig for sources. Ugog Nizdast (talk) 03:29, 22 January 2017 (UTC)
 * How can a person be born the oldest of four children? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.212.113.34 (talk) 05:10, 17 May 2020 (UTC)