Talk:Daoud ibn al-Adid/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AhmadLX (talk · contribs) 23:22, 26 February 2023 (UTC)

I will review this over the next few days. -- AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 23:22, 26 February 2023 (UTC)

A nice little article. I would have preferred some more detail, but given the dearth of info in the sources (I checked some of them), I think I can compromise on broadness. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 22:30, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Lead is too short.
 * al-Ḥāmid li'llāh and al-Ḥāmid li-'llāh
 * No diacritics per MOS (walī al-ʿahd -> wali al-ahd etc.)
 * 'Hidden Imam' should link to Occultation
 * Briefly introduce Qadi al-Fadil, Baha al-Din Qaraqush
 * Hi, thanks for taking the time to review this. I think I've addressed your points. Anything else? Constantine  ✍  13:00, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
 * No that was all from me, and this is a Pass. Nice work. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 22:38, 10 March 2023 (UTC)