Talk:Darren Aronofsky/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lemurbaby (talk · contribs) 05:55, 26 August 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:

Comments
This is looking great. Just a couple of minor points:
 * A few of the references use slashes rather than dashes to separate the date numbers - please make sure this is consistent.
 * It would be good to see a little more detail in the early life section - siblings, locations of schools, how/why he wound up in Africa for school etc.
 * The image "Darren by Nico Tavernise" is also published here and a different photographer is cited, suggesting to me that the uploader did not create it himself but took it from the web without authorization. Would you raise the issue with the Commons file reviewers and get their decision on it, or else remove the image?


 * I have fixed the references, removed that dubious image, and expanded the early life section. I believe I have addressed your concerns. Bruce Campbell (talk) 02:16, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Well done. I believe the article meets GA criteria now. Lemurbaby (talk) 18:50, 28 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Are there further complaints? Bruce Campbell (talk) 22:57, 29 August 2012 (UTC)