Talk:David Jewett Waller Jr.

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Assessment
The article is a good start. It has strong cites, clear narrative, neutral tone. Things to work on: Some language issues (sounds more like a list of facts than a narrative encyclopedia entry), and his notability - WHAT did he contribute, and how did it resonate? Legacy is a bronze tablet? That's it? EBY (talk) 05:52, 7 June 2013 (UTC)


 * I'll address these points.


 * 1) Legacy: The legacy, in addition to the bronze tablet, appears to be two, possibly three buildings named after him. Not terribly much, but more than a bronze tablet.
 * 2) Notability: He once held an office in the field of education on the statewide level. King Jakob  C2 13:53, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

The others will take some edits to address, I'll get back to you. King Jakob  C2 13:53, 7 June 2013 (UTC)