Talk:David Saxe

This page is written like an advertisement
I know - I know I'm supposed to slap on one of those tags so it will alert someone to come over and fix the page, but you know no one is going to bother and the page will look bad with that tag on top. So let me list what needs to be fixed IMO in order to make this page conform to how it should look. First off the lede is just an advertisement, how many people he employs and the size of his facility? The biography talks about his amazing family who were in show-business and the way it is written it sounds like someone close to Saxe wrote it, very glowing. It sounds like he single handily launched his sister Melinda's career and responsible for her fame. The references are a mess and it's full of too many external links. A list of his productions? This is out of my wheel-house but it seems very over the top - but maybe this is normal for this occupation? There are too many flags that belong on this page, but I would rather someone just rewrite it. I just stumbled across this after finding his sister's page, which was a mess but for other reasons. Please someone give this page some attention. Sgerbic (talk) 07:30, 14 December 2021 (UTC)