Talk:Delfin Lorenzana

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Look at the articles of former United States Secretaries of Defense: Jim Mattis, George Marshall, and Mark Esper. Lorenzana's article should end up similar to the aforementioned.

Jollibinay (talk) 07:41, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]