Talk:Demography/Archives/2016

The Intro is Kinda Mangled
The penultimate sentence of the intro paragraph (the entomology one) is somewhat mangled. I haven't looked onto the history to see when it got messed up, but it's not capitalized and has no space at the beginning. It also feels like it doesn't flow from the previous sentence.

Karatorian (talk) 16:37, 25 February 2016 (UTC)

I want to write short and easy definition. Rajvipra (talk) 19:15, 10 April 2016 (UTC)

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"The article is a bit short for such a big theme. I believe it can be improved, but suggestions should come from a real expert."

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 * Reference : Pablo Guillen & Robert F. Veszteg, 2010. "Raising "lab rats"," ThE Papers 09/11, Department of Economic Theory and Economic History of the University of Granada..

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