Talk:Dipylon Krater

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So far, it is a very well designed article already. When you say "The monumental vase is hollow at the bottom, reinforcing its function as a grave marker and not a mixing bowl", did you mean that there is a hole in the bottom that would allow liquid to flow out? You might want to clarify how/why a hollow in the bottom makes it a grave marker. A small caption under the picture would be useful.

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Sunni's Comment
Hi Noah, I think your article looks good so far! Your description of the krater itself is well written and detailed. I think you could even compare this maybe to other geometric kraters to show why this one is more important. Overall, keep working it looks great. Sunniobrien (talk) 21:45, 14 November 2017 (UTC)Sunni O'Brien

Comments from Prof. Paga
Hi Noah - this is a great start to your article! Here are a few suggestions for improvement. Jpaga (talk) 16:04, 2 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Make sure to put the citations after the punctuation (this is Wikipedia's preferred style).
 * In the last sentence, you write "...and reveals" but this makes it ungrammatical. Remove the "and."
 * The krater in the MET is 1 example of a Diyplon krater. In fact, this is a term for all monumental kraters found in Athens near the Dipylon Gate and used for burial purposes.  You should edit your article to reflect that this is a broad category.  You can keep your description of the MET vase as an example of the Dipylon Krater genre.