Talk:Disability and disasters

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Tone
The discrimination section of the article needs a more neutral tone. It seems as if there is a "call to action" occurring, specifically in the last few sentences. Vmc24 (talk) 22:34, 12 February 2022 (UTC)


 * @Vmc24 I found and removed two "conclusion/recommendation" sentences which I think goes some way to improving the article. I agree the tone could be better. My rule of thumb for improving encyclopedic tone is "kill all the adjectives" - keep only those you can justify. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 06:59, 16 February 2022 (UTC)

The Grenfell Tower Inquiry produced some good sources
Hi    Take a look at these news articles: I think they could be used to improve this article. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 06:14, 10 April 2022 (UTC)

Lead
Hello, I added more to the lead section with two new references. Vmc24 (talk) — Preceding undated comment added 20:23, 15 May 2022 (UTC)

Newbie Wikipedian
Hello! I just made my first ever Wikipedia edit here for the Fall 2023 #CiteNLM. I added the PAHO source (https://www.paho.org/en/news/6-12-2018-disability-inclusion-hospital-disaster-risk-management-ingrid-h). I am pretty sure this is a Wikipedia-approved source and that I added the information correctly. However, if you notice any issues with it, I am really open to feedback! Fugeww40 (talk) 20:52, 8 November 2023 (UTC)