Talk:Dove Book

Presentation of the Poem is Wrong.
1. Adding numbers to each fifth line as if someone were to come along and reference the poem appears to have been fruitless. You can clearly see no one has even talked of it nevertheless referenced from it. They have been greeted with a large clump of words and moved on.

2. Any will notice at the end after marking every fifth line there are still two lines left. Meaning the marking of every fifth line has no purpose given 1. above.

3. Splitting the poem by common custom of dividing it with a space after each 4th Line will make the poem a poem and thus more readable, ascetic and pleasurable from which then some might pause to read it and then learn perhaps to deduce its meaning.

4. I will thus compromise and divide the poem appropriately but leave in the numbers. One it will show how foolish the numbers are and two it might cause some to wonder why the numbers are there at which they can come here and find out that the numbers were introduced so that you'd not read the poem. Para59r (talk) 12:25, 15 June 2024 (UTC)