Talk:Dragonet

range
Does "western Indo-Pacific" mean the Indian Ocean, or what? &mdash;162.119.64.112 23:07, 29 November 2006 (UTC)

General Comments
1) Reproduction section →The section contains different elements of reproduction/mating, and it definitely can be divided in to subsections (courtship, spawning, etc.) →Part about sexual dimorphism should be located in a different section, or be placed properly in within the other text in the Reproduction section in order to fit appropriately.

2) Citing problems →Citation needs to be made after each sentence in which claims are made, not all at the end of the paragraph

3) Clarifications →Reproduction: "Both male and female dragonets have been observed in displaying..." Displaying what? →Reproduction: What exactly is a water column? →Reproduction: What do you mean by "one reproductive day"? Jyn0309 (talk) 04:39, 29 October 2013 (UTC)

Suggested edits
General edits:
 * Hyperlinks are needed
 * The organization of sections is lacking
 * Paragraphs get somewhat large; it would serve to cut them up
 * Citations should go at the end of specific sentences, not all at the end of a paragraph.

Specific edits:
 * Summary paragraph
 * Insufficient. Add information inline with what is in the article below it.


 * Description
 * Types of fins and whatnot really need to be defined or at least hyperlinked.
 * There is a dearth of citations. Fix that.


 * Reproduction
 * This section is too clumsy in structure. Cut it into 3-4 smaller paragraphs.
 * Citations should be strewn throughout the text at the end of relative sentences, not all clumped at the end.


 * Aggression
 * Fix the title
 * Consider expanding
 * Hyperlinks!
 * Fix citations


 * Feeding
 * Hyperlinks!
 * Fix citations


 * Locomotion
 * Is this sections strictly necessary?
 * Hyperlinks!
 * Fix citations


 * Aquariums
 * The image screws up this section completely.

Bakerb4379 (talk) 00:29, 1 November 2013 (UTC)

Suggested Edits
Should have some information on what kind of habitats they prefer

Reproduction: uses some terms that aren’t defined (water column), maybe should consider defining it or linking it to a page about water columns if there is one

Reproduction: what does “one productive day” mean?

Reproduction section seems to run on, maybe consider making it more concise or splitting it up into three or so paragraphs

All sections: shouldn’t have all the citations at the end of the paragraph, they should be at the end of each sentence to which they correspond — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gopara (talk • contribs) 04:39, 1 November 2013 (UTC)

Recommended edits
Great job!! To raise to a Good article status, I recommend: Hami910311 (talk) 20:39, 21 November 2013 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.252.110.213 (talk)
 * Add "Distribution and habitat" section. It will be better if you can add a picture showing their distribution.
 * Add "Taxonomy" section.

General Comments
Very good article! Contains lots of descriptive information but here are a few suggestions to help
 * Physical Description: Second paragraph of this section has no references for all the information presented there
 * Reproduction: Some of the information presented here are a little bit too in-depth, especially the numerical values. Maybe shorten it a bit and reduce unnecessary information
 * Feeding: Likewise, some information such as expelling food after eating are a bit too in depth or unrelated to the topic at hand
 * The later sections could maybe be combined with former sections, or expanded upon
 * Locomotion: This section seems unnecessary and too detailed for wikipedia
 * Defense: perhaps move this section up to the competition/aggression section? It could fit pretty well in there

MLiu19 (talk) 21:28, 21 November 2013 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.252.102.204 (talk)
 * In the aquarium section, the picture seems unnecessary and throws off the flow of the article. Perhaps removing it might be best

Suggested Edits
VAleles (talk) 17:37, 22 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Try to add more sections/information to give a more comprehensive view of the fish.
 * Try to add more images.
 * Defense section is a little short. Try to incorporate elsewhere or include more information.
 * If possible, try to break up the Reproduction section. It's a lot of text.