Talk:Dragons of Despair

Class Reassessment, November 18th 2008
Should this article be nominated for GA status? -Drilnoth (talk) 21:13, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
 * We can certainly give it a shot! It's better sourced than most articles. BOZ (talk) 22:06, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
 * It could use some work, but I'd be willing to give it a shot. BOZ (talk) 22:25, 18 November 2008 (UTC)

Does this help at all? If someone picks up the GA review, I can also ask there for more specific advice. BOZ (talk) 16:00, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't think that messageboard posts can be used for references, but it is certainly a good idea to be requesting input at ENWorld. -Drilnoth (talk) 16:38, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * No, I didn't mean to suggest it as a reference, just pointing out that, as you say, we can request input there. BOZ (talk) 16:43, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Okay; I can't really (no account, and no real interest in creating one), but anything that you can come up with would be great! -Drilnoth (talk) 16:46, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Sure thing. BOZ (talk) 17:02, 19 November 2008 (UTC)

Work needed
User:RJHall posted the following at WT:D&D. I'm copying it here for ease of reference. Perhaps I might provide some (hopefully) useful feedback? -Drilnoth (talk) 00:20, 2 December 2008 (UTC)
 * The lead might be on the short side at a single paragraph. Usually I expect to see a paragraph per major section, although two would probably suffice here.
 * There seems to be too many short paragraphs, too many short sections, and too much unnecessary bold-facing of the text. Italics should serve in most cases.
 * In the Synopsis section, please explain Solace without the reader having to drill down. Also, what does the second sentence have to do with the party? Please relate the geographic location of Solace to the ruined city of Xak Tsaroth.
 * If somebody (that has never played D&D before) started reading "first level of a more traditional style dungeon" or "time based and zone location wilderness encounters", what would they make of it?
 * Several of the references are not used for inline citations. Can these either be used to reference text, or be moved to a further reading section?
 * Some of the text needs a copy edit.

Assessment comment
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