Talk:Eastern woodrat

Overall the page is good it just needs alot of brushing up Taxonomy=citation needed not enough info on the eastern woodrat and too much info on other types of rats e.g Key largo and the Allegheny Distribution= needs grammar corrections on line #2 and line #4 "man as far west as Colorado" Hibernate paragraph needs work, it doesn't make sense or flow Habitat= talk of covering from predators should be under sub-section predators Foraging= paragraph #5 "Gnawed bones [probably] (opinion) used to sharpen teeth.. probably needs to be deleted Reproduction/Lifecycle= shouldn't start with fighting not organized sub-section at all should be lifecycle-reproduction-courtship, its all jumbled together — Preceding unsigned comment added by Serenaeve (talk • contribs) 20:21, 16 December 2016 (UTC)

Ecological role= few grammar corrections, written well otherwise Interaction with humans= nothing I saw wrong with it, written well Conservation= I liked it very specific and only useful information and oganized well Threats= Line #4 "reduced Illinois population",,by how many or from what to what?

Overall very impressed with class work. just some fine detail polishing and rearranging, in my opinion, still needs to be done — Preceding unsigned comment added by Serenaeve (talk • contribs) 20:49, 16 December 2016 (UTC)