Talk:Eden Lake

Um . ..
This paragraph:


 * A commotion begins in the house and the bathroom door is kicked open as Jenny is confronted by Brett, his father Jon, and the other party guests who attacking her by contrariety. Brett has convinced the adults that Jenny and Steve sadistically murdered Bonnie and the gang members, Jenny are accused of steal of the van of Reece also. Jenny begs Jon to call the police and attacks him with a razor she found in the bathroom. Jon quickly subdues her. Jon tells Brett to go upstairs, slaps him when he tries to say something, and takes Jenny back into the bathroom with two other men. Brett shuts the door of his room, blocking out her screams. He deletes the videos of the gang's crimes from Paige's phone, puts on Steve's sunglasses, and stares blankly into a mirror. 

...reads like it was written my someone for whom English was not their mother tongue. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.95.43.253 (talk) 22:10, 21 October 2021 (UTC)