Talk:Electoral district of Perth

Suggestions
This article looks pretty good to me, but I have a couple of suggestions: Regards, Somno (talk) 05:10, 9 December 2008 (UTC)
 * I think the lead could be a little more comprehensive. For example, since there's no article on the 1890 elections, it might be nice to mention the 30 single-member districts here? And the redistribution?
 * Why does the history section talk about 2007, then go back to 1911? Would chronological order be better?
 * Perhaps I'm having a dumb moment here, and I must admit I'm only skim-reading the article, but I don't get the Lotteries Commission controversy. Why were crosswords banned? The Lotterywest article is no help!
 * (Just noting that I did my best to address this review and some by other Australian editors with some edits made at the time.) Orderinchaos 16:49, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

I commented on this at AWNB at the time, but it appears to have been missed: the history section is weak after 1993. I'd like to see at least another sentence about the very close race in 1993 and the fairly major preselection battles that preceded Hyde's taking the seat in 2001. Rebecca (talk) 21:44, 3 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Added a section on the 1999 preselection tussle, but no idea where to even start looking for the 1993 stuff, and I'm not sure what can be said about it beyond, it was close (which the article already says). Orderinchaos 10:51, 4 January 2009 (UTC)