Talk:Ellen Harvelle/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 20:45, 8 January 2010 (UTC) This is a nice article overall, though I did find a few issues:
 * Refs #13 and 15 are only bare URLs; need to be fixed.
 * Done. Ω  pho  is  18:13, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
 * The lead isn't bad, but feels a little lacking with plot info; it can be beefed up a bit.
 * Done. Ω  pho  is  21:55, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
 * "Likewise, actress Samantha Ferris described her as a "gun-toting, beer-slinging, bar-owning broad" with a "very maternal core"." Quotes need cites.
 * The citation is after the subsequent sentence. Ω  pho  is  23:14, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I see you added in a ref name tag. :) Ω  pho  is  01:34, 9 January 2010 (UTC)
 * "At the 2009 Comic-Con, Eric Kripke revealed that Ellen would be returning in the fifth season." This feels out of place now since the fifth season's partially over, as is the character arc from how I read it. Modify to fit it in better or remove.
 * Done. Ω  pho  is  18:13, 11 January 2010 (UTC)
 * "Though happy to see her return in the fifth season, Ryan was disappointed at the lack of screentime the character received in the episode." Which episode? Or is episodes meant?
 * Fixed, and added some more review stuff regarding her death. Ω  pho  is  01:34, 9 January 2010 (UTC)

I'll put this on hold and pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 20:45, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm pleased with the improvements made to the article, looks a lot better. As such, I'll pass it. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 01:12, 12 January 2010 (UTC)