Talk:Eric G. Hall

Observations
I have a number of observations to make on this article:

1. How did Hall qualify as a bomber and as a fighter pilot? I thought it was one or the other. 2. In the 'Indo-Pakistan war of 1947' section, para 2, what does 'BRB' as in 'BRB canal' stand for? 3. In the 'Post war' section, it states: "...and served its first director-general". I wonder if there shoud be an 'as' between 'served' and 'its' because if so, it would change the meaning of the sentence. 4. Also in the 'Post war' section, the last sentence does not make sense in the context of the rest of the section.

RASAM (talk) 12:42, 10 August 2011 (UTC)