Talk:Ethiopia and the World Bank

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1) I believe you need to compose an opening paragraph to either introduce or give a summary of the nation and their relations with either the International Monetary Fund or the World Bank Group. As of right now, I do not see a "lead section"

2) You listed out two sections, with some content inside, which is a good start, it is a good outline. I believe you have a lot of potential build off of it.

3) From what I see right now "Voting Power in World Bank Group" and "Recent Projects" sections I can see that you are planning on elaborating the entirety of the World Bank Group and the five organizations, which is holistic and great. You also have projects in mind that you would like to talk about which is potential.

4) From the only paragraph, you have in your "History" section I can see that your writing is neutral and professional, that you are simply stating facts and elaborating upon them. So, if you continue that for the rest of your article I think you would be in good shape.

5) I, unfortunately, can only find two sources on your page, but of the two, they are both reliable World Bank Group sources, which is good. I would definitely recommend adhering to the requirements of six, however.

WilliamLi1998 (talk) 03:45, 4 December 2019 (UTC)WilliamLi1998

1. Leading paragraph seems to have the most information and does not really reflect the rest of the article. 2. There are no clear links to other Wikipedia articles. Headers are fine and the article is pretty organized. 3.Article is lacking concrete information and could be further expanded. 4. The language in the article is not subjective and it seems to be neutral. Very good job. 5. the 6 sources seems to be missing. Please add a references header with your sources. The sources should also be linked after each sentence where used/summarized. Evancorn (talk) 10:43, 5 December 2019 (UTC)Evancorn

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 1 October 2019 and 14 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Balakey Burum. Peer reviewers: Adiep1.

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