Talk:Félicette/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:34, 9 June 2019 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  06:34, 9 June 2019 (UTC)


 * "On 3 November 1957 the Soviets sent Laika, a dog, into space on Sputnik 2. The dog was a stray found on the streets of Moscow." Change this to "On 3 November 1957 the Soviets sent Laika, a stray dog found on the streets of Moscow, into space on Sputnik 2."
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)   05:57, 24 June 2019 (UTC)
 * I've seen people use nosecone or nose cone. Which one is it?
 * Looks like the Wikipedia article is nose cone, so I suppose that is fine. Either is acceptable, depends on the style guide.  Kees08  (Talk)   05:57, 24 June 2019 (UTC)
 * "Centre d'Enseignement et de Recherches de Médecine Aéronautique (CERMA), purchased 14 cats from a pet dealer for the testing" Comma not needed.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)   05:57, 24 June 2019 (UTC)
 * "Excluding the reticular measurements, high quality data was recorded throughout most of the flight. Data recorded during reentry was of lower quality." Merge these two sentences.
 * Made an attempt  Kees08  (Talk)   05:57, 24 June 2019 (UTC)
 * "The statue will be located in Eastern France at the International Space University." When was it announced?
 * Ref also needs a date, not just the access date.
 * Added the date to the ref, was that all you were suggesting?  Kees08  (Talk)   05:57, 24 June 2019 (UTC)


 * Link Ham in the article, and remove the Laika and Ham links in the see also section.
 * Ham was already linked; rm'ed excessive See also links.  Kees08  (Talk)   05:57, 24 June 2019 (UTC)

That should be it. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  04:25, 24 June 2019 (UTC)