Talk:False brinelling

The wording in this article needs cleaning up, it currently reads in a very simplistic and technically incorrect manner. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 109.231.194.93 (talk) 08:18, 28 April 2016 (UTC) http://www.sheldonbrown.com/brandt/fretting.html
 * Excellent! We all look forward to your contribution. -AndrewDressel (talk) 12:53, 28 April 2016 (UTC)