Talk:Fire Escape Collapse

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 * Added archive https://archive.is/20120730025118/http://www.archive.worldpressphoto.org/search/layout/result/indeling/detailwpp/form/wpp/q/ishoofdafbeelding/true/trefwoord/year/1975 to http://www.archive.worldpressphoto.org/search/layout/result/indeling/detailwpp/form/wpp/q/ishoofdafbeelding/true/trefwoord/year/1975

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Sentence makes no sense
This sentence, "[t]ear sheets [sic] on [sic] the photos were placed on [sic] 128 American newspapers and those in several foreign countries." Tear sheets (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tear_sheet) have nothing to do with the publication of this famous photograph. The rest of the sentence is ungrammatical as tear sheets are not "placed on [sic]" newspapers but are torn from them to prove the publication of an advertisement. Therefore, I have edited it and combined it with the preceding one. Autodidact1 (talk)